Oh well, in that case, I request only constructive criticism. Use the sandwich approach so you don't shatter my fragile ego, okay? Compliment, criticism then compliment. [He was using one hand in the air like a chopping motion as if he were laying out a sandwich. He could be an entertainer at heart.
Considering Vander had a two sets of clothing aside from the Neon uniform, he was not in the business of mocking anyone's attire. He made do with what he had, a minimalist through and through.] Oh will you? I see you're planning for a second date before we've even experienced the novelty of the first. You are an opportunist.
[He hadn't thought of her for some time now, and he found bringing Felicia up now was like scratching at a wound that still hadn't healed right. He tightened his arm around Maria's shoulders, forcing on a smile that didn't reach his eyes for the first time.] Yeah, she was like my sister. Life of the party, always willing to dance and laugh. She made me feel like I could accomplish anything. [He glanced down at Maria.] You have her vibe, and I expect she would have liked you. Of course, you're your own person, and I've enjoyed our time together.
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Considering Vander had a two sets of clothing aside from the Neon uniform, he was not in the business of mocking anyone's attire. He made do with what he had, a minimalist through and through.] Oh will you? I see you're planning for a second date before we've even experienced the novelty of the first. You are an opportunist.
[He hadn't thought of her for some time now, and he found bringing Felicia up now was like scratching at a wound that still hadn't healed right. He tightened his arm around Maria's shoulders, forcing on a smile that didn't reach his eyes for the first time.] Yeah, she was like my sister. Life of the party, always willing to dance and laugh. She made me feel like I could accomplish anything. [He glanced down at Maria.] You have her vibe, and I expect she would have liked you. Of course, you're your own person, and I've enjoyed our time together.